FF6:ROSE Dialog Script Notes

0	Slattery.
1	Slattery's figure of speech "wild goose chase" superimposed on more literal sentence structure.
2	See #1; "Witch" is the common N.A. replacement for "The girl said to have the power of madou[kWhazit: Sorcery]" in official translations.
3	Slattery, replaced "even breathe" with "lift a finger". "Even breathe" considered too hyperbolic, considering Terra would literally be breathing freely as the line is being spoken.
4	(W)
5	Slattery, word for word. (Had to pull a few strings...)
6	Mostly Slattery. Slattery's novel "took the place of magic" replaced with "gave new birth to civilization". "took the place of magic" implies that pre-War society at large was built on magic, which is not implied by established lore. (See #2011, #2013 - while the power of Sorcery in principle may have been widespread, actual magic users must have been in the minority)
7	Slattery, simplified; The consensus among the sources is that the "who" of this sentence is plural.
8	DarkMage.
9	DarkMage.
10	Slattery; removed redundant "Remember what we're here for."
11	Slattery.
12	(W & S)
13	Spooniest merged w/ kWhazit.
14	(W)
15	Slattery.
16	(W & S)
17	kWhazit; them->'em. "We've got 'em trapped now" (W, S) considered too cocky of a tone for the very overwhelmed Narshe guards to take.
18	Woolsey; "defend" -> "hold [DarkMage]".
19	(W)
20	(W)
21	Woolsey; "Whoa!" -> "Oh...! [kWhazit]"
22	Slattery; Simplified/casualized the definition for slave crown. Slave crown now defined before its relationship to Terra is given.
23	Woolsey/Slattery; "a thing" -> "anything". "a thing" considered too poetic/dramatic.
24	Slattery; "so fast" -> "this fast [Woolsey]". Includes Slattery's "You must be made of tougher stuff than most", which is analogous to "Strong will you have there. [kWhazit]". Woolsey's rendering omits Old Man's explicit acknowledgment that there must be something unique about Terra.
25	Slattery; split into 2 speakers as in FF6j.
26	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery; split into multiple speakers. 2 speakers instead of FF6j's 3, since there are only two guards shown outside.
27	(Unused) (W & S)
28	Slattery; Novel "fools" -> "brutes" (see Woolsey #32)
29	Slattery; Reformatted into a single sentence.
30	Woolsey; "controlled" -> "enslaved [Slattery]". Exchanged second and third lines (as in FF6j), making the intro read more chronologically. Iconic phrase "gift of magic" is NOT replaced by "power of sorcery (kWhazit)" -- impact on the overall magic/sorcery distinction is insignificant.
31	(Unused) (W & S)
32	Slattery + "Now hurry! (kWhazit)", line omitted by Woolsey & Slattery.
33	Slattery.
34	Slattery.
35	Woolsey, reformatted; "With this Slave Crown" -> "Once this slave crown touches your head (DarkMage)", w/r/t literal "If I put this manipulation band on you (kWhazit)"
36	(Unused) (W & S)
37	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey & edited for style. Slattery's novel "Soldiers of the Empire!" -> "Gestahlian Empire!" ("Gestahlian Empire" appears in FF6j on the following page of the same caption.)
38	(Unused) Slattery merged into Woolsey's tone, updated to use Sorcery as the distinct term for "madou"
39	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey & edited for style.
40	Slattery; "Took you long enough [Woolsey]" -> "About time you got here [DarkMage]".
41	Page 1: kWhazit, adapted to wording set up by #40. // Page 2+: Slattery. "Tsk tsk [kWhazit]" -> "Pfft" (certainly an editorial decision).
42	Woolsey merged w/ kWhazit, edited for style.
43	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey. The script needs more than one use of the term "witch" before #124
44	Slattery; lightly edited for style. "Miss Terra" inserted; It would seem unlikely that Locke would know Terra's name otherwise.
45	Mostly new; based on Woolsey & kWhazit.
46	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey.
47	Slattery.
48	Slattery; "Guard" -> "Marshal" used to match the Marshal enemy name.
49	(W & S)
50	(W & S)
51	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey.
52	(W & S)
53	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey.
54	Slattery; "leader of the guards" -> "Marshal" (see #48).
55	(W)
56	(W & S)
57	Slattery.
58	(W & S)
59	(W & S)
60	Woolsey; "Uhh" -> "Ugh (Slattery)"; "can't remember"->"can barely remember", since Terra will demonstrate a valid recollection in her very next line; "past or present" -> "recent or otherwise", since the present is not a subject of memory.
61	Woolsey, reformatted.
62	Slattery, adapted to #61; "So, you have amnesia..." -> "Memory can be like that...." - Locke's wistful comment (lit. "Memory...") modified from Slattery to sound more distracted, less deliberate.
63	Woolsey, reformatted; Label "MAN" -> "King"
64	Slattery; ellipsis added to emphasize Terra's disorientation.
65	Slattery.
66	Slattery.
67	Woolsey w/ kWhazit & DarkMage
68	(W)
69	DarkMage.
70	Slattery merged w/ kWhazit
71	Slattery, lightly edited for style w/r/t kWhazit
72	Slattery.
73	Woolsey, reformatted.
74	Woolsey, reformatted.
75	Slattery.
76	W & S, lightly edited for style w/r/t DarkMage
77	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
78	Slattery.
79	Slattery.
80	(W)
81	Slattery; Adaptive Dialog added for M.C. Edgar.
82	Slattery; "Magi" -> "Mages" -- In FF6j there is no 1:1 association between the sorcerers mentioned here and the belligerents of the War of the Magi (lit. the Great Magic War). Woolsey uses "Mage Warriors", which is much more specific a term than intended. "Mage (pl. Mages)" is both general enough AND properly recalls the standard job/class name used by previous FF's for sorcerers--something FF6j's writers almost certainly intended to do. The implicit term "Magus (pl. Magi)" in this script would refer to ANY being with magical capabilities.
83	Slattery, lightly edited for a more frustrated tone.
84	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey; "this very desert" -> "the desert", since Figaro Castle may be in either of two distinct deserts at the time.
85	Mostly new phrasing; "harnessed" taken from Woolsey #87; Restored commonly omitted "power called magic" (lit.) as "force called magic". "Force" better distinguishes the intangible principle/ability "Magic" from the more tangible substance "Sorcerous Power".
86	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey.
87	Slattery; "set his sights" -> "taken aim at", as firearms are not common in the world of FF6; Power of Magitek" -> "Magitek Power" to emphasize its tangibility vs. that of the principle/ability "Magic". Magitek (lit. Sorcery/Sorcerous) is treated by this script as the Empire's own "brand" of Sorcerous Power. When the subject of Sorcerous Power comes up in reference to the Empire, the brand name frequently overtakes the general term. By the Returners' Hideout scene, this script makes it quite clear that the two terms are synonymous.
88	Slattery; Restores use of Edgar's name; Adaptive Dialog added for M.C. Edgar.
89	Slattery; "Highness" -> "Majesty".
90	Slattery, simplified & edited for style.
91	DarkMage, lightly edited for style. This script uses localized "Matron [Woolsey]" instead of the more-accurate "High Priestess". In the words of Lina Darkstar, "...it's a Shinto thing."
92	(W)
93	(W)
94	(W)
95	(Unused) (W)
96	Woolsey merged with Slattery, edits for style w/r/t Mato.
97	W & S; Adaptive Dialog added for M.C. Edgar.
98	Slattery, lightly edited for tone.
99	DarkMage ("I'm sure we'll be out of here in no time") w/r/t Lina Darkstar(?); Adaptive Dialog added for M.C. Edgar.
100	Slattery.
101	DarkMage; Adaptive Dialog added for M.C. Edgar.
102	Slattery; "nice" -> "sweet (DarkMage)"
103	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
104	Slattery.
105	Slattery.
106	W & S, edited for style.
107	(W & S)
108	Slattery merged w/ DarkMage & reformatted.
109	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey & edited for style.
110	Woolsey edited for style, in part w/r/t DarkMage
111	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery & lightly edited for style.
112	Slattery edited for style, in part w/r/t DarkMage ("toppling")
113	Slattery merged with Woolsey
114	(W & S)
115	Slattery; "There's someone" -> "There's...someone", since without any irregularity of tone, Edgar would have little reason to suspect Kefka in particular; "here to see you, sire!" -> "approaching! (DarkMage)", since Kefka has not yet arrived.
116	Spooniest.
117	(W & S)
118	Slattery.
119	W & S, reformatted.
120	Woolsey merged w/ kWhazit.
121	Dynamic: Woolsey for Figaro, Slattery for Thamasa.
122	Page 1: Based on Slattery: Edgar is not complaining about a few Imperials showing up, but rather that the Empire at large is poised to invade. "We have an alliance... (Slattery)" -> "We remain allies, after all..." in order to keep the word "allies (Woolsey)" rather than "alliance (FF6j)". // Page 2: Rodimus Primal merged with kWhazit
123	Page 1: Slattery; "my humble castle" -> "my humble abode", as there is no specific use of "castle"; still keeping something of Woolsey's "lowly presence". // Page 2: (W)
124	Slattery, lightly edited for style.
125	Slattery.
126	Page 1: Woolsey slightly expanded w/r/t Slattery. // Page 2 Slattery; "Hee-hee-hee..." -> "Mwa, ha! (Woolsey)"; Early ROSE efforts replaced "Oh, Edgar..." with "How pathetic..." because, while Slattery's addition of a transition is appropriate, Kefka does not use Edgar's name here in FF6j -- but in the long run, Slattery's line is far superior.
127	(W & S)
128	Page 1: Woolsey. More interesting than faithful translations, for example "I didn't like the sound of that...[Slattery]" or "I can't stand those guys...[kWhazit]" -- Note: If Slattery is most faithful, then Woolsey skips out on some added ominous tone-setting. No regrets. // Page 2: Slattery.
129	W & S; "Take" -> "Show" (DarkMage)
130	Page 1: Slattery. Note: "chancellor" is plural in FF6j. Page 2: DarkMage, lightly edited for style (", sadly").
131	(W & S)
132	{Note: This caption is almost certainly a holdover from an early draft of the script where Terra does not meet Locke until after Edgar. The result is a glaring continuity error on page 2.} Page 1: Mostly new, with Slattery's structure. "drag you around [Slattery]" -> "putting you through so much" to emphasize Locke directly affecting Terra's state of mind (kWhazit: "...make you feel uneasy"). "without giving you a chance to rest [Slattery]" considered an error, since Terra WAS given a chance to rest after first talking to Edgar; "before we could even get acquainted" used instead: to emphasize that, indeed, Locke has not yet introduced himself to Terra, and that this would be a good time for him to do so. // Page 2: Slattery; "...Edgar told me about you." -> "Edgar just mentioned a bit about you.": Slattery is more literal, but it screams "continuity error!", since we never see Edgar say anything to Terra about Locke. The new rendering instead points to a brief off-screen window of opportunity where Edgar could have said such a thing to Terra: The scene of Kefka's approach, during which Edgar would have been exiting the great hall, potentially accompanying Terra, before handing Terra off to Locke, after which we see Edgar walking outside to meet Kefka.
133	Slattery; Exclamation point removed so that Locke isn't completely blowing up, but the caps are retained. Still getting a bit testy! Tone influenced by Lina Darkstar.
134	Slattery, edited for style. "On the surface"/"pretends" considered a bit too casual for referring to a high-profile binding agreement between two heads of state -> "Officially" used instead, which, like "On the surface", implies that there is more going on than what's on paper.
135	Page 1: slattery, lightly edited for style. // Page 2: kWhazit
136	Slattery.
137	Woolsey merged w/ kWhazit & Slattery.
138	Slattery, edited. "All that matters is that you" -> "The important thing is that you're free to": Locke is not giving direction to Terra, or turning her focus away from her discomfort, but rather putting a positive spin on her predicament in order to offer reassurance. In FF6j Locke is saying something like "It [your discomfort] just goes to show that you have your own free will from now on." // Page 2: Woolsey merged w/ kWhazit
139	New; Based on Slattery #138 ("your own decisions"). In FF6j Terra contemplates Locke's words, repeating them in the first person ("My own free will...")
140	Slattery, reformatted.
141	Slattery.
142	Slattery.
143	Page 1: (W & S) // Page 2: W & S merged w/ kWhazit. // Page 3: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
144	(W)
145	Woolsey, reformatted.
146	Spooniest; Woolsey's exclamation point removed to match FF6j's tone.
147	Slattery; lightly edited to match Woolsey's tone.
148	Slattery.
149	Slattery.
150	Slattery. Note: Woolsey's use of "shameful" right before "delightful" is actually pretty great here, and perhaps warrants reconsideration.
151	(W & S)
152	(W)
153	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery
154	(W). Note: Speculation: Slattery avoids "Submerge" here, and uses "Dive" instead, as though the word "Submerge" ought only be used with reference to liquid.
155	kWhazit merged with Woolsey.
156	Slattery.
157	Slattery.
158	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
159	(W). Note: Riding on a chocobo, wind blowing in everyone's hair, still in the process of ditching the empire -- Locke is definitely speaking in the present tense.
160	Page 1: kWhazit, edited for continuity. In FF6j, "Where those bad people (Slattery)" implies Terra has not already learned about THE "bad people", the Empire, from Locke. One may speculate this is Terra having a memory lapse, but it is more likely a continuity error (See #162). "Were those the bad guys?" is used instead. FF6j's "I'm scared" -> "I'm getting scared": This feeling must be actively developing, because Terra was just kicking the bad guys' butts in good spirits during the previous battle scene.
161	Slattery.
162	Slattery merged w/ kWhazit. For continuity, uses Slattery's "Like I told you before," where no such phrase exists in FF6j. In FF6j, this line forgets that Locke has already told Terra about the Returners (#134). In fact, this whole scene seems to be unaware of Locke's previous conversation with Terra (see #160).
163	kWhazit.
164	Woolsey, updated to use the second person (Slattery & kWhazit); "magical" -> "sorcerous" (kWhazit); Added "As we've gathered", since Edgar is speaking on, at best, third-hand information.
165	Slattery.
166	Page 1 & 2: Slattery. // Page 3: +"and its secrets" (kWhazit). // Page 4: Woolsey, edited for tone. Note: Woolsey changed the line from Terra's power falling into the Empire's hands to Terra herself falling back into the Empire's hands. // Page 5: Slattery; "understand" -> "know the truth about" (kWhazit) in order to fit with edits to #167.
167	Woolsey, updated to use the second person (Slattery & kWhazit); +"and find out" as alternative to kWhazit's "and look for the truth". Note: Slattery rendered this as the added sentence, "He may be able to help you find out more about why you have them." -- considered to slow down the pace too much to be worth what amounts to only modest clarification.
168	Woolsey w/ +"I think so, too." added at the beginning, based on Slattery & kWhazit. Avoids Slattery's added use of Edgar's name.
169	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery; "Okay!" retained based on kWhazit.
170	Slattery merged with Woolsey; Woolsey's "construction" -> "maintenance".
171	Slattery; "sire" -> "Majesty", since "sire" will be set aside for Cyan as his archaic address instead of "sir".
172	(W & S)
173	(W & S)
174	(W)
175	(W)
176	(W)
177	Woolsey; "Took" -> "Swiped" (DarkMage)
178	(W & S)
179	(W)
180	Woolsey; +"When it's down there," qualifier (DarkMage)
181	Slattery.
182	Slattery.
183	Slattery.
184	Slattery.
185	Woolsey; "my husband" -> "Duncan" (Slattery), since "my husband" is used in #187.
186	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery
187	Slattery; edited for tone.
188	DarkMage (Slattery, edited for style).
189	Woolsey, reformatted.
190	kWhazit, edited for style.
191	Woolsey merged w/ kWhazit.
192	Slattery.
193	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery, edited for style.
194	Slattery.
195	(W & S)
196	Slattery; "man" -> "guy" (Woolsey)
197	Slattery; "man" -> "guy" (Woolsey), edited for style.
198	Slattery; Adaptive Dialog added for M.C. Edgar.
199	Slattery; Edited for style.
200	Slattery.
201	Slattery, lightly edited for style.
202	Slattery; omitted "I hear" (Woolsey)
203	Slattery; lightly edited for style.
204	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
205	Slattery; edited to match Woolsey's tone
206	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
207	Woolsey; "a millionaire" -> "the richest man in town" (Slattery).
208	Slattery.
209	Woolsey, reformatted.
210	Woolsey, edited for style; "had dinner here" based on Slattery
211	Slattery, re-punctuated.
212	Slattery, edited for style.
213	Slattery.
214	Woolsey, edited for style; + "Brrr_" influenced by Mato's stream "It's cold."
215	Rodimus Primal
216	Slattery, lightly edited for tone; "cider" -> "rum" (Rodimus Primal)
217	Slattery.
218	Slattery, edited for style; "cider" -> "rum" (Rodimus Primal)
219	Slattery.
220	Slattery. Note: Slattery changed "man" to "family" for clarity.
221	Slattery.
222	Slattery.
223	Slattery, "Rosebud" -> "Wild Rose" (kWhazit), likely intended as a callback to FF2
224	Woolsey edited liberally for style.
225	(W)
226	(W)
227	Woolsey, re-punctuated; "cider" -> "rum" (Rodimus Primal)
228	Slattery.
229	Woolsey, "......What do you think?" -> "...What do you take me for??" for clarity.
230	Slattery; "cider" -> "rum" (Rodimus Primal); edited for style.
231	Slattery merged w/ kWhazit
232	Slattery, edited for style.
233	Slattery/Woolsey; Paraphrased alternate line "This ship won't be leaving any time soon." assigned to second sailor
234	Slattery.
235	Spooniest/DarkMage, re-punctuated to match tone of Woolsey/Slattery.
236	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery
237	DarkMage (from Slattery) // Alternate line taken from unused #244
238	Slattery, re-punctuated for style // Alternate line taken from unused #244
239	DarkMage (from Slattery) // Alternate line taken from unused #244
240	DarkMage merged w/ Slattery
241	Spooniest.
242	Woolsey, edited for clarity.
243	Slattery merged w/ kWhazit
244	(unused) Slattery.
245	Slattery.
246	(unused) (W)
247	Slattery.
248	(W & S). Note: ROSE v1.00 changes "Who're" to "Who are" due to Mato-induced paranoia
249	Page 1: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery. // Page 2: Slattery.
250	(unused) Slattery, edited for clarity w/r/t kWhazit.
251	kWhazit; "You'll die now" (kWhazit) -> "You won't be leaving here alive" (new); Last clause edited to match closer to Woolsey's line. Alternate taken from unused #250; appears if all possible information about Duncan & Vargas has been gathered from earlier NPCs.
252	(W & S)
253	Slattery.
254	(W)
255	kWhazit, edited for style.
256	Slattery; Novel "Vargas's" removed & reworked, in part to prevent the line from sounding too extroverted. Terra is supposed to be on the "scared" side of things lately...
257	Woolsey, adapted for #256. Matches kWhazit.
258	Slattery.
259	Page 1: Woolsey, re-punctuated for tone. // Page 2: Slattery. // Page 3: Slattery/Woolsey; "Returner hideout" -> "Returners' hideout".
260	Page 1: Slattery, re-punctuated w/r/t kWhazit. // Page 2: Slattery merged w/ Woolsey. // Page 3: Slattery.
261	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
262	Slattery.
263	DarkMage merged w/ Woolsey/Slattery
264	Slattery.
265	DarkMage (Slattery edited for style)
266	(W & S)
267	Slattery.
268	DarkMage (based on Slattery), edited for clarity
269	(W & S)
270	(W & S)
271	(W & S)
272	(W)
273	Woolsey; "GP" -> "gil"; Adaptive Dialog added for M.C. Cyan & Gau
274	Woolsey; "GP" -> "gil"; Adaptive Dialog added for M.C. Cyan & Gau
275	Slattery, reformatted.
276	Slattery, edited liberally for style.
277	kWhazit, reformatted for tone.
278	Slattery.
279	New; Somewhat maintains the ambiguity of FF6j lit. "No fleeing!" -- (Is Banon speaking literally, or figuratively? [Issue raised by Lina Darkstar]). Woolsey makes it explicitly literal, Slattery makes it explicitly figurative.
280	Slattery.
281	Slattery, edited for style; Uses Woolsey as starting point for the 5 vices, rather than Slattery's novel use of the 7 deadly sins; "violence" -> "wrath", "control" -> "coercion".
282	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery, edited for style. Woolsey's novel "We now confront those evils..." segue is retained.
283	(W & S)
284	kWhazit merged w/ Slattery.
285	Slattery w/ Woolsey gil amount. Note: This is one of the falling chests in Owzer's house.
286	Slattery w/ Woolsey item. Note: This is one of the falling chests in Owzer's house.
287	Slattery w/ Woolsey item. Note: This is one of the falling chests in Owzer's house.
288	Slattery w/ Woolsey item. Note: This is one of the falling chests in Owzer's house.
289	Slattery; second sentence edited for style.
290	(unused) Slattery; lightly edited for style.
291	Slattery.
292	Slattery; Alt line "Welcome! We've heard all about you." used when Terra/Locke/Sabin/Edgar not present
293	(W & S)
294	(W)
295	(W & S)
296	Slattery; lightly edited for style.
297	Slattery.
298	Woolsey, reformatted.
299	Slattery; "wastebasket" -> "dustbin"
300	Page 1: New rendering - same concept as Woolsey, but less awkward. // Page 2: Slattery, edited to sound less desperate. // Page 3: Slattery, edited to sound more certain and less speculative. Literal rendering may seem speculative (kWhazit: "you might have people..."), but it is more likely a rhetorical technique, rather than an attempt to be optimistic (Woolsey/Slattery: "I'm sure there are people...").
301	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey, partially w/r/t DarkMage
302	Slattery, edited for style, partially w/r/t Rodimus Primal
303	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey
304	Woolsey/Slattery edited for style; "become" -> "be" (kWhazit)
305	Slattery.
306	(W & S)
307	Page 1: (W & S) // Page 2: Taken from unused #290.
308	Page 1: (W & S) // Page 2: Taken from unused #290.
309	Slattery.
310	Page 1: DarkMage. // Page 2 & 3: Slattery. // Page 4: Woolsey, reformatted.
311	Woolsey, re-punctuated for tone w/r/t Slattery.
312	Slattery.
313	Slattery.
314	Slattery.
315	Slattery.
316	Slattery.
317	DarkMage (Novel rendering to match better with the item received), edited for tone & structure w/r/t kWhazit
318	Slattery.
319	Slattery.
320	(W)
321	Slattery; "Hey," -> "Whoa!" (DarkMage)
322	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery
323	(unused) Slattery, re-punctuated for tone.
324	DarkMage, "Those" -> "His" w/r/t Woolsey's "him"
325	Woolsey; "Figaro" -> "South Figaro" (Slattery/FF6j)
326	Woolsey; Pause added for pacing.
327	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
328	Page 1: kWhazit merged w/ DarkMage, some rephrasing for style. // Page 2: Slattery, rephrased to open with "Do NOT let..." a la Woolsey's "Don't let..."
329	Slattery.
330	Page 1: Slattery. // Page 2: Woolsey, first sentence merged w/ Slattery for clarity. // Page 3: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
331	Slattery, + "good chance" (kWhazit) -> "good opportunity".
332	Slattery.
333	Slattery.
334	Slattery; alt line "Make sure they keep you safe, Banon!" added for M.C. Banon.
335	Slattery; removed "huge, " which is a bit of a stretch and does not appear in Woolsey.
336	kWhazit merged w/ Slattery. Using "Magitek" for "sorcerous / of sorcery".
337	Slattery, reformatted.
338	Woolsey, "is" -> "was" for clarity.
339	(W)
340	Page 1: Slattery, edited for brevity. // Page 2: Slattery; Added clarification "Magitek" -> "a sorcerous power like Magitek". This is where the revised script makes explicit the pseudo-equivalence between "Magitek" and "sorcerous power" (See #87); a necessary addition somewhere early in the script, also needed here in particular since this is the point at which the conversation topic turns from the Empire to the War of the Magi.
341	Woolsey; removed "ancient" w/r/t Slattery, kWhazit.
342	Slattery.
343	kWhazit, edited for style. Note: Woolsey and Slattery's treatment here considered to make Locke sound too childlike.
344	Page 1: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery. // Page 2: kWhazit, rephrased partially w/r/t Slattery; "you realize" (kWhazit) -> "after all". // Page 3: Part of a Slattery sentence, padded out for pacing. // Page 4: DarkMage, significantly rephrased. Novel reference to machinery (from Woolsey/Slattery) removed -- The clarfication added in #340 intends to solve the problem that motivated Woolsey's innovation; "energy" -> "supernatural energy" for clarity and style.
345	kWhazit merged with Slattery; uses the general term "sorcerous power" rather than "Magitek power", in order not to diminish Terra's apparent self-association with the means described in #344 (as noted by Lina Darkstar). [Note: So far in the script, "Magitek" may be reasonably assumed only to refer to mechanical applications; "Magitek Knight" has not yet appeared.] So, this scene establishes the following: Magitek is the Empire's name for its application of sorcerous power; Sorcerous power, a tangible form of energy, may occur naturally in Espers; The Empire may be obtaining its sorcerous power by draining it from Espers, and this is how Terra believes she gained her own abilities.
346	Page 1: Slattery, edited w/r/t/ kWhazit. Another opportunity taken to demonstrate "Magitek" as a speical name for "sorcerous" power. (See #87) // Page 2: New edit paraphrased from kWhazit, a bit more literal than Slattery. // Page 3: Slattery. // Page 4: DarkMage, likely based on Lina Darkstar. Lina Darkstar makes Espers plural, W & S is singular. Plural is nice because it lends a little more fuel for Locke's shocked reaction. I see no problem with Banon viewing the frozen Esper as a potential representative of the lost Espers as a collective. // Page 5: DarkMage, sans novelty. Slattery gives this line to Edgar, should be Locke.
347	Page 1: Woolsey, lightly edited to bring the meaning more in line with kWhazit. // Page 2: Slattery.
348	New edit, mostly literal, with elements taken from Woolsey, kWhazit, and Slattery
349	Woosely; question mark added after ellipsis to make clear that Locke is nudging Terra for a response, and not just being a sap. (See FF6j, which does not use an ellipsis.)
350	Page 1: kWhazit. // Page 2: Lina Darkstar, edited for style; kWhazit used as reference. Slattery's "What the hey" considered too modern.
351	Woolsey with stutter in "E...emergency" restored w/r/t kWhazit, merged with Slattery.
352	Slattery.
353	kWhazit merged w/ Woolsey
354	(W)
355	(W & S)
356	Woolsey, repunctuated.
357	Slattery.
358	(W & S)
359	New edit based on Mato "clutches"
360	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery, lightly edited for style.
361	Slattery.
362	Slattery.
363	(unused) (W & S)
364	(unused) (W & S)
365	Slattery.
366	Woolsey, repunctuated.
367	(unused) Slattery, repunctuated.
368	Slattery.
369	Slattery; "on the fly" Woolseyism -> ", pronto". Too bold of me?
370	Slattery.
371	Slattery, repunctuated for tone; alternate line taken from #373 for Locke in soldier costume
372	Slattery.
373	Slattery.
374	Slattery.
375	Slattery, rephrased.
376	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey; Woolsey "Of course!" -> "Oh, yeah...!"
377	Slattery.
378	(W & S).
379	W & S, edited for style.
380	Page 1: kWhazit merged with Slattery, incorporating Woolsey "cowards" // Page 2: Slattery.
381	Page 1: New edit, Woolsey & kWhazit used as reference. // Page 2: DarkMage.
382	Slattery, repunctuated.
383	(W & S).
384	Slattery.
385	Slattery, repunctuated.
386	Slattery, reworded to match Star Wars 1:1.
387	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
388	Slattery.
389	Page 1: Slattery. // Page 2: Slattery merged w/ kWhazit; Novel phrasing added: "The Returners are here!?"
390	Slattery.
391	Woolsey merged w/ Lina Darkstar
392	Page 1: Woolsey. // Page 2: Woolsey merged w/ kWhazit. // Page 3: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery & kWhazit
393	(W & S)
394	W & S, repunctuated.
395	(W & S)
396	Slattery. (#396 & #397 are reversed in Woolsey)
397	Slattery, reformatted. (#396 & #397 are reversed in Woolsey)
398	(W & S)
399	Slattery.
400	Slattery.
401	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey, lightly edited for tone w/r/t kWhazit & Lina Darkstar.
402	Slattery.
403	Page 1: kWhazit // Page 2: Slattery.
404	Slattery.
405	(W)
406	Slattery, lightly edited for style.
407	Slattery, lightly edited for style.
408	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
409	Slattery, ommited "inside".
410	New edit in second person, keeps Woolsey "Rascals!"
411	Slattery, repunctuated.
412	Slattery, edited for style.
413	Slattery.
414	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery. Keeps Woolsey "no sense of humor!".
415	Slattery, repuncutated; alt line added for party leader Edgar/Banon
416	Slattery.
417	Woolsey merged w/ kWhazit
418	Page 1: DarkMage (Slattery lightly edited). // Page 2: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
419	Page 1: kWhazit, repunctuated. // Page 2: Slattery, edited for style. // Page 3: Slattery merged w/ DarkMage.
420	Slattery.
421	Page 1: Slattery. // Page 2: Slattery, edited for brevity. // Page 3: Slattery merged w/ kWhazit.
422	Page 1: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery. // Page 2: Slattery; lightly edited to be more consistent with the fact that the Empire had just massacred 8 of the town's guards just a few days prior.
423	Page 1: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery. // Page 2: Slattery edited for brevity.
424	Slattery, repunctuated.
425	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey.
426	Slattery.
427	Page 1: Slattery. // Page 2: Spooniest, repunctuated. // Page 3: kWhazit merged w/ Slattery. // Page 4: Slattery. // Page 5: Slattery, edited for brevity & style; Omitted "orange" (Slattery) as too specific of a detail for Edgar's apparent level of familiarity.
428	Slattery (Woolsey w/ compound word "clockmaker"), edited for style.
429	Woolsey, "clock maker" -> "clockmaker"; Adaptive Dialog label: party leader.
430	Woolsey, reformated & lightly edited w/r/t Slattery for clarity & pacing.
431	Woolsey's tone merged with Slattery's meaning
432	Slattery.
433	(unused) Slattery merged w/ Woolsey. Would make sense as a line by the traveling merchant.
434	Slattery.
435	Slattery.
436	Slattery.
437	Slattery.
438	(W)
439	(W & S)
440	kWhazit, lightly edited for clarity; Adaptive Dialog w/ label for party leader.
441	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery; Adaptive Dialog w/ label for party leader.
442	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery
443	Page 1 & 2: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery. // Page 3: Woolsey, Adaptive Dialog w/ label for party leader.
444	Woolsey; Adaptive Dialog for party leader.
445	W & S; Adaptive Dialog inserts text from unused caption #433 if Gau has not yet been recruited; Adaptive Dialog for party size.
446	W & S; Adaptive Dialog w/ label for party leader.
447	Slattery toned down w/r/t Woolsey.
448	Slattery.
449	Woolsey, reformatted.
450	Woolsey, slightly edited w/r/t Slattery.
451	Page 1: W & S, reduced colloquiality. // Page 2: Slattery reordered w/r/t Woolsey, reduced colloquiality.
452	Page 1 - 4: Slattery. // Page 5: Slattery + kWhazit. // Page 6: Woolsey, edited for punctuation.
453	Page 1 - 4: Slattery. // Page 5: Slattery + kWhazit. // Page 6: Woolsey, edited for punctuation.
454	New; reworded from Slattery.
455	(unused) Slattery.
456	(W)
457	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
458	Slattery, reformatted.
459	Page 1: W & S, "Yahooo" -> "Hell, yeah!". "Yahooo" considered too friendly/endearing. "Yee-haw" was a candidate here, but would come off as too much of a caricature to some readers. // Page 2: Slattery.
460	Page 1: Woolsey merged w/ kWhazit. // Page 2: Slattery. // Page 3: Merged Woolsey, Lina Darkstar, DarkMage; reworded for style. // Page 4: Slattery. // Page 5: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
461	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
462	Page 1: (W & S) // Page 2: Woolsey edited w/r/t Spooniest. // Page 3: Slattery.
463	Page 1: DarkMage merged w/ Slattery. // Page 2: Woolsey, repunctuated for tone. // Page 3: Woolsey.
464	Page 1: Slattery, lightly edited for style. // Page 2 & 3: (W & S)
465	DarkMage, lightly edited for style. Omits FF6j/Woolsey "knife", considered too redundant (and thus cheesy) with caption #467.
466	Page 1: Woolsey, repunctuated w/r/t Rodimus Primal // Page 2: Woolsey merged w/ kWhazit. // Page 3: Slattery, lightly edited for style.
467	Page 1 & 2: Slattery. // Page 3: Slattery, "wet" -> "piss" // Page 4: Woolsey.
468	(W & S)
469	(W & S)
470	Woolsey, reformatted partly w/r/t kWhazit
471	Slattery
472	Page 1: Woolsey. // Page 2: Slattery.
473	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
474	(W & S)
475	Slattery; "smack" -> "right smack", added "Impresario" label, removed "Oh, dear..." w/r/t Woolsey.
476	(W)
477	Slattery.
478	Page 1: Slattery. // Page 2: Slattery merged w/ Woolsey.
479	(W)
480	Page 1: Slattery; lightly edited for tone. // Page 2 & 3: Slattery.
481	Reworked Slattery.
482	DarkMage (reworked Slattery, fantastic humor).
483	OPTIONAL CONTINUE. (normally unused blank caption)
484	New. "Rogue" (Woolsey) said by a soldier is considered ambiguous. "Swine" (Slattery) considered too archaic.
485	Mostly new; "an Imperial [Woolsey, Slattery]" -> "the Imperial", since this line is meant for the case where Sabin has met Shadow, and thus has already heard about the camp. Adaptive Dialog added for the case where the party has met Shadow, but Sabin has not, using caption #481 for alt text.
486	Slattery, lightly repunctuated for tone.
487	Slattery, edited for simplicity.
488	Slattery.
489	Slattery.
490	Page 1: Slattery, lightly edited for style. // Page 2: "Kefka, sir!" -> "Lord Kefka, sir!" (DarkMage) // Page 3: Slattery merged w/ Woolsey.
491	Page 1: Slattery merged w/ kWhazit. // Page 2: 1st sentence - Slattery lightly edited for style. 2nd sentence - New; attempt to localize FF6j insult / figure of speech lit. "feed him the grime off of General Leo's nails [kWhazit]"
492	Slattery.
493	Page 1: Slattery merged w/ Woolsey. // Page 2: Slattery.
494	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey.
495	DarkMage (based on Slattery) merged w/ Woolsey.
496	Slattery, somewhat simplified and restructured w/r/t kWhazit.
497	(W & S)
498	Slattery.
499	Slattery.
500	(W)
501	(W & S)
502	Slattery; added kWhazit "to the homeland" -> "to the capital"
503	Slattery.
504	Page 1: Slattery merged w/ kWhazit (verb tense) // Page 2: Slattery. // Page 3: Slattery.
505	Slattery. (Woolsey + capitalization corrected)
506	Slattery.
507	Woosley; Adaptive Dialog converts into conversation w/ Sabin if Shadow is party leader
508	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery
509	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery. Adaptive Dialog adds speaker label & slightly adjusts tone if Shadow is party leader
510	Slattery; Adaptive Dialog adds speaker label & slightly adjusts tone if Shadow is party leader
511	Slattery; Adaptive Dialog adds speaker label & slightly adjusts tone if Shadow is party leader
512	Slattery.
513	Page 1: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery (verb tense) // Page 2: Woolsey/Slattery, reformatted for comedic effect; Adaptive Dialog added for speaker label. Page 3: Spooniest merged w/ DarkMage.
514	Slattery; "water" -> "boring creek"
515	Page 1: Slattery. // Page 2: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
516	Page 1: Slattery; "Try not to" -> "Don't" to avoid phrase duplication w/r/t #515. Slattery's use of Kefka's name is novel, and well worth it. // Page 2: Slattery; "those" -> "lands (Woolsey)".
517	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey
518	Page 1: (W & S) // Page 2: Woolsey/Slattery repunctuated. // Page 3: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery. // Page 4: First sentence Slattery, second sentence kWhazit. // Page 5: First sentence Spooniest "serve(s) them right" merged with Lina Darkstar "fools", second sentence Woolsey.
519	Slattery. (Woolsey, "That's" -> "You're")
520	Woolsey; "You're history" -> "You're in for it" w/r/t kWhazit "I'll make you suffer"
521	(unused) kWhazit; "twit" -> "dolt". "Are you that desparate to suffer!?" very literal rendering actually works here.
522	Slattery, appended Woolsey "What a toad!" off-the-wall insult
523	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery
524	New. "Wait (Woolsey et al.)" -> "Stop" to avoid over-repetition with the battle dialog. Adaptive Dialog switches to alternate line, unused #521, for this caption when player catches up with Kefka.
525	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery & referencing kWhazit. "Oh, gripe" -> "Shit"
526	Slattery.
527	Woolsey; "Hee, hee!" -> "Hee-hee... (Slattery)"
528	Woolsey; "COMMANDER" -> "Captain (Slattery)"
529	Slattery (Woolsey lightly edited).
530	Slattery.
531	Slattery.
532	Slattery.
533	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey, lightly edited for style.
534	kWhazit.
535	Slattery.
536	Slattery.
537	Slattery.
538	Slattery.
539	Slattery, edited for style.
540	Slattery.
541	(W)
542	Page 1: Lina Darkstar // Page 2: Slattery; label "King" -> "King of Doma" (lit. King Doma [W])
543	Page 1: Woolsey; "Excellency" (atypical for monarchs) -> "my liege" (more generic for subject addressing his lord) // Page 2: Slattery; "King" -> "King of Doma" (see #542), First sentence "Oh, Cyan..." -> "Ah, it is you..." since FF6j & Woolsey do not use Cyan's name (& King uses Cyan's name shortly after). // Page 3: kWhazit. // Page 4: W & S; "King" -> "King of Doma" (see #542) // Page 5: Slattery, shortened w/r/t Woolsey. // Page 6: Slattery, repunctuated for tone w/r/t kWhazit/FF6j
544	Page 1: Slattery; lies->lieth (basis "the difficulty lieth not here" found in 17th century publication) // Page 2: Woolsey; "Uhh..."->"Uhn...", reformatted for pacing, "KING DOMA" -> "King of Doma" (see #542) // Page 3: Slattery; removed novel ", my lord". // Page 4: Slattery; "King" -> "King of Doma" (see #542), "your family" -> "them [novel]" for style, "cough" -> "hack [Woolsey]". // kWhazit, recapitalized.
545	New; close to literal "Be strong [kWhazit]"/"Pull yourself together", but rendered to better fit the scene. Other translations don't seem to capture very well the fact that Elayne is found already gravely unconscious from the poisoning, almost certainly dead, and Cyan is calling for her to come to. Woolsey's rendering isn't wrong per se, but it does give an impression of having missed something of the obvious gravity of Elayne's condition.
546	New. kWhazit ("Can such... Can such a thing be allowed...?") keeps FF6j's structure, but Slattery's word choice ("This is...unpardonable") is closer to literal; neither "allowed" nor "(un)pardonable" feel credible here on a raw emotional level. "(Un)forgivable" would be closer; What's important is Cyan expressing that this evil is great enough to make even the possibility of atonement unimaginable. The new edit forgoes mentioning forgiveness explicitly in order to focus in on the extremity of the evil -- which is really what kWhazit/FF6j "...such a thing..." is capturing as well. Note: line similar to Woolsey's "can't be happening" used via Slattery in #560. "Unforgivable" comes back explicitly in #561.
547	Slattery; removed extra exclamation point w/r/t FF6j
548	Slattery; "master" -> "liege [Woolsey]"
549	Slattery; second sentence converted to a question w/r/t kWhazit/FF6j
550	Rodimus Primal (Woolsey, "lowdown"->"vicious [Lina Darkstar]", "contemptible"->"evil"); "Doma Sentry" -> "Doman Sentry [Slattery]"
551	Slattry.
552	DarkMage (Slattery; "enemies" -> "foes", "tired" -> "weary").
553	Slattery, edited for reduced coherence w/r/t kWhazit & Woolsey. "D... Dear me [Woolsey]", while currently considered still too coherent for the extreme shock that Cyan is experiencing, warrants reconsideration. It's an absolutely nauseating rendering, in a good way.
554	Slattery
555	Slattery; w/ alt. line via Adaptive Dialog to avoid repetition: kWhazit
556	Slattery.
557	New. "Highness [Woolsey]"/"Excellency [Slattery]" considered less appropriate for a monarch -> "Majesty"
558	Slattery.
559	(W & S)
560	First sentence adapted from Slattery, or Woolsey in #546; Second sentence New; similar to Slattery "This is not possible...", edited to better match the meaning and intensity of Woolsey ("Idiotic!") and FF6j (lit. "This is stupid!", a difficult-to-translate expression for disbelief towards an outrageous situation).
561	New. Elements of Slattery/Woolsey, both considered to miss the mark in terms of passion; rhythm informed by kWhazit/FF6j; intensity informed by Lina Darkstar; all-caps sentence influenced by Spooniest. Wording of final sentence matches Rodiums Primal.
562	Slattery; "area's" -> "area is" for decreased friendliness
563	Slattery.
564	Slattery; "Grrr!" -> "Rrraagh!" influenced by Lina Darkstar/kWhazit/Spooniest; "There will" -> "There'll" to reduce formality & increase passion
565	First sentence "Rrraagh!" see #564; Second sentence kWhazit repunctuated w/r/t Slattery; "ye" -> "you" since "Which of___...?" should take the oblique case (i.e. Which of them...?), and the archaic second person plural oblique personal pronoun is apparently "you" exclusively. Confirmed basis found in 17th century publications (Which of you doth...)
566	Slattery; one of the two extra exclamation points removed w/r/t Woolsey/kWhazit/FF6j
567	First sentence Slattery; Second sentence Woolsey. Alt text "Gotta" -> "We've gotta" via Adaptive Dialog if M.C. Shadow (Sabin still speaker).
568	Slattery.
569	Slattery; "me" -> "us" via Adaptive Dialog if M.C. Shadow (Sabin still speaker).
570	Slattery; Adaptive Dialog makes second person plural if M.C. Shadow.
571	Spooniest (reworded from Woolsey); "Lemme" -> "Let me [Woolsey]"; added question "Who's next!?" to the beginning, influenced by more accurate Slattery/kWhazit/FF6j; Adaptive Dialog if M.C. Shadow- changes line to Slattery
572	Slattery; "Grrr!" -> "Rrraagh!" (see #564); added "Sir [Woolsey]" -> "sire".
573	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey; "do" -> "finish [Woolsey unused #575]", since Cyan & Sabin have already been 'doing this together' for two battles so far. The line may have intended "this" to refer to the pending battle only, but the ambiguity makes it easily come across as though Cyan has been obstinately refusing Sabin's help to that point.
574	Slattery.
575	(unused) Slattery.
576	Slattery; inserted "truly" w/r/t kWhazit "verily"; added "sire" w/r/t Woolsey "kind sir". Using "sire" early as much as possible in order to adequately prep for #597.
577	Woolsey; "Eeoooa" -> "Rrraagh" (see #564); "Be you" -> "Art thou [Slattery]"; "enemy" -> "foe [Spooniest]"; reformatted.
578	Woolsey; Dynamic Dialog alt line for M.C. Shadow: Slattery, lightly edited for style.
579	Slattery; removed one extra exclamation point w/r/t Woolsey
580	First & second sentence Darkmage; Third sentence Woolsey merged w/ Slattery
581	Page 1: Slattery merged w/ kWhazit. // Page 2: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
582	Spooniest; reworded to be closer to literal (kWhazit, Slattery).
583	Slattery.
584	Woolsey, reworded for more literal meaning w/r/t kWhazit. Wordy retranslations (Slattery "...this monstrosity!") seem to detract from the humor of Cyan plowing through a bunch of soldiers.
585	Slattery, "let's" -> "we're gonna" for style.
586	(W)
587	Slattery.
588	Slattery.
589	Page 1: New; common figure of speech which, when interpreted, has a meaning slightly closer to literal (w/r/t Mato & kWhazit) than Slattery. (When the ironic pun was realized, it instantly blew away about four other candidates for the line.) Slattery's opening "Okay" -> "Whew" to avoid repetition w/ #585. There is a slight chance this line was actually meant to explain why Cyan joined Sabin permanently, and if so, Lina Darkstar was the only one to partially pick up on that. The next page uses the first person plural (same as Woolsey) to help make up for it if that meaning was erroneously missed. // Page 2: Woolsey; "Say," -> "So, [Slattery]". // Page 3: Slattery; "passes" -> "passeth".
590	Woolsey merged w/ kWhazit; "garbage" -> "junk [DarkMage]"
591	(W)
592	Slattery.
593	Slattery repunctuated w/r/t kWhazit.
594	Slattery; "might these be" -> "are these [Woolsey]"; added ", sire" to help prep for #597.
595	Slattery.
596	Slattery; added ", sire" to help prep for #597.
597	Page 1: First sentence Slattery; Second sentence Woolsey, edited to use "Sire" as Sabin's initial slip-up rather than "Thou art". Neither is particularly believeable; however, the more syllables are involved, and the further one has to slip from modern English to get there, the harder it is to suspend one's disbelief for the sake of the joke. // Page 2: Slattery; "you!" -> "thee... No, YOU! Dammit! [novel]" Sometimes the best fruit is hanging so low, it would be a crime not to pick it. Now that the baseline gag is established, it can be repeated in exaggerated fashion for the real comedic payoff. Partial justification for the extension is also found in the fact that Slattery's exasperation is subdued ("Great, ...") while the original FF6j demands an exclamation ("Confound it all! [Woolsey]" / "Oh crap! [kWhazit]").
598	Slattery.
599	Slattery.
600	Woolsey; "It'll" -> "It will [Slattery]"; "throughout" -> "all throughout [Slattery]"
601	Slattery (Woolsey recapitalized).
602	Slattery.
603	kWhazit merged w/ Woolsey.
604	Slattery.
605	Slattery, "Have you heard about" -> "Are you familiar with" to more closely match meaning of kWhazit
606	First and second sentence Slattery, w/ Adaptive Dialog for Confirm/Cancel button config; Third sentence Woolsey, "View" -> "Open", "Main Menu" -> "field menu", recapitalized.
607	Page 1: Slattery merged w/ Woolsey. // Page 2: Woolsey; "increasing" -> "an upgrade in", "decreasing" -> "a downgrade in". // Page 3: Woolsey; inserted "An equals sign" before '=' at the beginning. // Page 4: Woolsey; inserted "The letter" before 'E' at the beginning. // Page 5: Slattery.
608	DarkMage (reworded & shortened Slattery); "without fear of being attacked" -> "without being attacked".
609	Slattery; "both the L and R buttons" -> "the L and R buttons simultaneously".
610	Page 1: Slattery. // Page 2: "battle commands" -> "a battle command" // Page 3: Slattery; updated for SNES button map
611	Slattery.
612	Page 1: Slattery merged w/ Woolsey. // Page 2: Darkmage, lightly edited for consistency with following page. // Page 3: Slattery, lightly edited for clarity.
613	Slattery, "attacking" -> "currently attacking" for clarity.
614	Page 1: Slattery, "numbers" -> "numerals". // Page 2: New explanation for colored MP numerals.
615	Slattery, lightly edited for clarity.
616	New, semi-informed by Slattery & kWhazit; Adaptive Dialog added for M.C. Cyan & Gau.
617	Page 1: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery. // Page 2: Slattery, "skills" -> "abilities". // Page 3 & 4: Slattery; "0" -> "zero", sentences reordered w/r/t kWhazit. // Page 5: Woolsey; "weapon" -> "physical attack".
618	Slattery. (confirmed w/r/t kWhazit)
619	Slattery; reworded for second-person to be similar to #617. Slattery uses combined sentences here instead of headers with explanations (Woolsey/FF6j) (see #617).
620	First sentence DarkMage, "core" -> "prime" w/r/t kWhazit "prime traits"; Second sentence Slattery.
621	Slattery, lightly edited for clarity.
622	DarkMage (Slattery lightly edited); "unique battle skills" -> "specialized battle commands".
623	Slattery, reworded for style (simpler second person)
624	Page 1: Slattery. // Page 2: kWhazit.
625	Slattery.
626	Page 1: Slattery; "you have" -> "you've obtained". // Page 2: Woolsey, Adaptive Dialog on Yes/No choice for M.C. Cyan & Gau.
627	Page 1: Slattery; "Abilities" -> "Ability"; "main menu" -> "menu (Woolsey)". // Page 2: Slattery lightly reworded, Adaptive Dialog for configured confirm button. // Page 3: DarkMage; Added "Note that" to the beginning w/r/t Woolsey "Remember" / kWhazit "The catch is that". // Page 4: (W) // Page 5: Slattery reworded into second person. // Page 6: Slattery, reworded for style. // Page 7: kWhazit, reworded into second person.
628	DarkMage; "gain in experience" -> "gain experience"
629	Page 1: DarkMage merged w/ Slattery. // Page 2 & 3: Slattery.
630	New. Rewritten to reduce ambiguity & match what happens onscreen. It's a tutorial.
631	Slattery, reformatted.
632	Slattery, reformatted.
633	Slattery, reformatted.
634	Slattery, reformatted.
635	Slattery, reformatted.
636	Slattery, reformatted.
637	Slattery, removed one of three exclamation points. (FF6j has none.)
638	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey.
639	Slattery.
640	Woolsey/Slattery; "Crescent Island" -> "Greater Delta Island" (lit. "Greater Triangle Island [kWhazit]". "Delta" is more literal of a shape than "Crescent". "Greater" implies the existence of a "Lesser", a hint pointing to the small triangular island accessible later on.
641	Slattery.
642	Woolsey, reformatted.
643	Woolsey; "power" -> "lost power"; "exists" -> "exists in traces" w/r/t "weak though it may be [Slattery]" / "though only faintly [kWhazit]"; "Crescent" -> "Greater Delta" (see #640).
644	Slattery.
645	(unused) Slattery.
646	Slattery.
647	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey
648	Slattery.
649	Woolsey; "Chop" -> "Chop chop"; "Let's go" -> "Time to"
650	Slattery.
651	Slattery/Woolsey; Adaptive Dialog adjusts tone according to the current M.C. (Sabin/Cyan/Shadow/Ghost)
652	(W)
653	Slattery.
654	kWhazit; "Such talk as this is no strong point of mine." -> new "I was clearly made not for this sort of banter" partly w/r/t Woolsey "this kind of talk"
655	(W)
656	(W & S)
657	New; meaning close to kWhazit, uses second person w/r/t Woolsey; "A_are you [Woolsey]" -> "A-art thou"
658	Woolsey, reformatted; "are you" -> "You" for brevity
659	Woolsey, reformatted.
660	First sentence Slattery; Second sentence kWhazit, "engine room" -> "engineer's cabin [DarkMage]"
661	Page 1: Woolsey; memorable aggressive tone preferred over literal "I'm this train's conductor [Slattery]"; "I manage" -> "I'm in charge of". // Page 2: Slattery; restored "Hmmm..." at the top of the page, which was impossible on the GBA version's 3-line captions; Adaptive Dialog added for M.C. Cyan.
662	First sentence Slattery merged w/ Woolsey, "departed [Slattery]" -> "dead [kWhazit]"; Second sentence Woolsey, "can" -> "may [DarkMage]" w/r/t Slattry "are granted" / kWhazit "gain" -- the eternal rest acquired is given as somewhat distinct from the place of rest itself.
663	Slattery. Woolsey ("Can't follow us now") is much more literal here, but Slattery feels more natural. Early ROSE effort to split the difference ("Should be the last we see of 'em...") was too awkward to retain in the long run.)
664	Page 1: Slattery. // Page 2: First sentence kWhazit, second sentence Slattery reformatted.
665	Page 1: Slattery; "This train" -> "The Phantom Train [Woolsey]" w/r/t kWhazit. // Page 2: kWhazit, edited for style & tone w/r/t Woolsey; "war" -> "conflict [Slattery]", pseudo-intensifier "possibly [kWhazit] -> pseudo-intensifier "any sort of"
666	(W) (Early ROSE effort used kWhazit)
667	Slattery; "I think" -> "Perhaps [Spooniest]"; "touch" -> "tamper with [Rodimus Primal]"
668	Woolsey & Slattery; removed exclamation point w/r/t kWhazit
669	Slattery.
670	Slattery. (Early ROSE effort used Woolsey.)
671	Slattery.
672	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery and slightly reworded for style. Slattery's extension to the dialog verified w/r/t kWhazit
673	Woolsey merged w/ kWhazit. Woolseyism "a total klutz" -> toned down "totally helpless", still more interesting rhetoric than Slattery's "afraid", and more accurate than Slattery as well (kWhazit: "no good", Lina Darkstar: "bad")
674	First sentence: Slattery. Second sentence: kWhazit, removed exclamation point (present in FF6j) w/r/t Woolsey & Slattery. Would get the same result by simply rewording Woolsey to the archaic Cyan style.
675	Page 1: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery, lightly reworded for brevity & style. // Page 2: Slattery; "could" -> "might [kWhazit]"
676	(W & S)
677	Slattery.
678	Slattery.
679	Slattery.
680	kWhazit
681	Slattery.
682	Slattery.
683	Slattery; "Whew" -> "Phew" w/r/t kWhazit "pant pant" -- "Whew" considered to indicate less exhaustion; Adaptive Dialog removes "all" for M.C. Cyan
684	Woolsey/Slattery; Adaptive Dialog adds speaker label for M.C.
685	Woolsey/Slattery; words divided by syllable rather than by letter
686	(W & S)
687	Woolsey, repunctuated for suspense.
688	First sentence Woolsey; Second sentence Slattery.
689	Woolsey, fixed punctuation.
690	Woolsey.
691	Woolsey or Slattery depending on M.C. via Adaptive Dialog
692	Slattery reworded for brevity & tone w/r/t Woolsey; "I believe" -> "I'm afraid"; ", Sir Sabin" removed w/r/t FF6j/kWhazit
693	Page 1: New, very common exclamation upon having an idea. // Page 2: Slattery.
694	Page 1: First sentence Slattery; Second sentence Woolsey, edited for simpler literal meaning w/r/t kWhazit & Slattery. // Page 2: Woolsey; The sudden hyper-Zen tone of Sabin in Woolsey's rendering here is great humor.
695	(W)
696	Slattery, broken up into one speakers per sentence w/r/t FF6j/kWhazit; Adaptive Dialog adds speaker labels based on sprite position.
697	Slattery.
698	Page 1: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery; uses "Ziegfried [Woolsey]" here rather than "Siegfried [Slattery]". // Page 2: Woolsey; "grandpa, here," -> "Grandpa there [Slattery]"; "run" -> "lumber away [DarkMage]". Note: This script reframes Woolsey's likely unintended misnomer "Ziegfried" as an alternate spelling used only for the fake Siegfried.
699	Page 1: Woolsey; "manicurist" -> "grandma's manicurist" modifier supplied in order to parallel "greatest swordsman". (Note for the unseasoned: 'Grandma' here is a fixed trash-talking device, not a literal reference to a person.) // Page 2: DarkMage (Woolsey lightly reworded, adds "En garde! [Slattery]" to the end); "Allow me" -> "Allow me, then," for cohesion.
700	Woolsey; "bag of wind" -> "windbag" (Gives alliteration to the phrase; also no reason to reinvent the original metaphor from the compound word). Note: Slattery uses "windbag" in #699.
701	First sentence Slatter merged w/ Woolsey, uses "Ziegfried" (see #698); Second sentence Slattery, "But..." -> "But still..." in order to ham it up slightly w/r/t the very drama-queenish renderings of Woolsey ("I...I'm the greatest...") & Lina Darkstar ("Howeeeever!"). Note: Woolsey's rendering is novel.
702	Woolsey; "SIGFRIED" -> "Ziegfried" (See #698)
703	Woolsey; "train cars" -> "cars" w/r/t Slattery
704	Slattery; "compartment" -> "cabin [DarkMage]"; "We've gotta" -> "Gotta [Woolsey]"; Adaptive Dialog adjusts wording/tone for M.C. Cyan/Shadow.
705	Page 1: Slattery. (Woolsey splits into two pages, which could potentially indicate a second speaker for the second line, but FF6j gives no such indication.) // Page 2: Slattery; "train" -> "engine [kWhazit]".
706	Slattery.
707	Slattery.
708	kWhazit.
709	Woolsey.
710	Slattery.
711	Slattery, lightly edited for style.
712	Page 1: Woolsey. // Page 2: Woolsey, reworded for style. Deviates from FF6j (kWhazit: "An we continue on riding, such will come to pass" / Slattery: "Unless we find a way off, I am afraid that is exactly where we will end up..."), but Woolsey's version is a well-taken opportunity to remind the player of Cyan's grief -- and is kind of humorous at the same time.
713	First sentence Woolsey, lightly edited for style & cohesion. Second sentence Slattery, "If it" -> "If this thing" w/r/t Woolsey, adds exclamation point w/r/t kWhazit sentences 1 & 3. // Page 2: (W & S)
714	(W & S)
715	Page 1: Slattery. // Page 2: Slattery; "He seems" -> "This one seemeth". // Page 3: Slattery, reformatted; "No way!" -> "Forget it!" w/r/t Woolsey #716.
716	Slattery.
717	Slattery; Adaptive Dialog adds speaker label & adjusts wording for M.C. Cyan.
718	Slattery; Adaptive Dialog adds speaker label & rewords for M.C. Cyan
719	Slattery; removed novel second line.
720	Page 1: Slattery. // Page 2: Slattery; removed "this train" w/r/t kWhazit "Needs we must leave quickly!"
721	Woolsey merged w/ kWhazit.
722	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
723	Slattery/Woolsey repunctuated.
724	(W & S)
725	(W)
726	Slattery; removed exclamation point from second sentence w/r/t Woolsey.
727	Slattery; "Is that" -> "Could it be" to avoid repetition w/ #726 "Was that".
728	(W & S)
729	Slattery; "faster" -> "sooner" w/r/t meaning of kWhazit & Woolsey
730	(W & S)
731	Slattery; "so happy" -> "so very happy" for added elegance w/r/t kWhazit "I had every happiness with you."
732	Slattery; "Dad" -> "Papa", "Mom" -> "Mama" (DarkMage).
733	Slattery merged w/ Woolsey.
734	(W)
735	Slattery (Woolsey repunctuated)
736	Page 1: Slattery; "south of here" -> "south" for brevity w/r/t Woolsey & kWhazit, "lies" -> "lieth", "ferocious" -> "vicious [kWhazit]". // Page 2 & 3: Slattery. // Page 4: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery, inserted novel "sire" w/r/t Spooniest "sir" for style; "we can reach [Woolsey]" -> less-certain "we should be able to reach" w/r/t kWhazit "ought to be".
737	(W & S)
738	First sentence Slattery/Woolsey, replaced exclamation point (w/r/t FF6j & kWhazit) with intensifying edit "your help" -> "all the help"; Second sentence Slattery.
739	(W & S)
740	Woolsey; "You crazy?" -> "You crazy!?" w/r/t DarkMage
741	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery
742	Slattery; Adaptive Dialog adds speaker label & adjusts for M.C. Cyan
743	Woolsey, extended based on Slattery; "You" -> "You folks" & "flowing" -> "flowin'" for tone w/r/t Lina Darkstar '...everyone bears a thick country accent, further emphasizing the backwater nature of the place'; Adaptive Dialog adjusts for party size and makeup
744	Slattery.
745	New; based on Slattery, but rewritten for style w/r/t Lina Darkstar (see #743)
746	Slattery.
747	(W)
748	(W)
749	Page 1: Slattery. // Page 2: Slattery; edited for brevity; "thinking" -> "thinkin'" for style w/r/t Lina Darkstar (see #743)
750	First two sentences Slattery; removed novel/paraphrased extended content; Third sentence New, based on Mato/FF6j middle sentence missing from Woolsey ("You should be careful [Mato]") & tone informed by Lina Darkstar (see #743).
751	Slattery; edited for style w/r/t Lina Darkstar (See #743); Adaptive Dialog for M.C. Gau & timing.
752	Page 1: Slattery. // Page 2: Slattery; edited for brevity & tone w/r/t Woolsey; Adaptive Dialog for M.C. Gau.
753	DarkMage (Slattery edited for clarity); "that current" -> "those currents" for consistency w/ #752.
754	Page 1: Slattery. // Page 2: Slattery; "our only diving helmet was" -> "our diving helmets were all" for believability.
755	First sentence Slattery heavily edited: removed "greviously injured" (replaced by Woolsey in sentence 2), "wandered" -> "was found limping"; removed "not too long ago" for brevity w/r/t Woolsey; Second sentence Woolsey; Third sentence Slattery, "his condition doesn't seem to be improving..." -> "things aren't looking good" for brevity & style w/r/t Woolsey "It doesn't look good". // Page 2: Slattery.
756	Slattery; "Mom" -> "Mama"
757	Slattery.
758	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery; Slattery's novel clarification -> "the other day [kWhazit]"; Adaptive Dialog for M.C. Gau. Note: Woolsey & Slattery use "animals" instead of "monsters [kWhazit]", likely for believability's sake.
759	First sentence Slattery (Woolsey considered a little awkard/unclear in spite of good style); Second sentence Slattery; "I can" -> "My service can", "service" used to retain something of Woolsey's "I am at your service", also somewhat justified by Mato's interpretation, that the line is said 'in a polite way...you would talk to a customer' as a representative of a 'business'.
760	Slattery.
761	Page 1: Slattery; "Injured Lad" -> "Wounded Soldier [kWhazit/Mato]". // Page 2: Slattery merged w/ Woolsey; Woolsey's "caught me_and did this_" parallels kWhazit "found and maimed"; Slattery beats around the bush even more than Woolsey. // Page 3: W & S, "see Lola" -> "see my Lola" for coherence, influenced by DarkMage's novel "see my dearest Lola". // Page 4: Slattery.
762	Page 1: Slattery. (Early ROSE effort based more on Woolsey; Slattery's accuracy confirmed by Mato.) // Page 2: Slattery. // Page 3: First sentence New, based on meaning of kWhazit "How is your health doing?" -- kWhazit already suggests that Lola knows of the soldier's injuries, Woolsey never makes it explicit, Slattery does not indicate it until later; Second sentence Woolsey merged w/ kWhazit; Third sentence Woolsey. // Page 4: Slattery. // Page 5: Woolsey merged w/ kWhazit; "every day [kWhazit]" -> "each day".
763	Slattery; added "Wounded Soldier" speaker label from #761; repunctuated w/r/t kWhazit -- ellipsis hints at the sidequest.
764	Slattery.
765	Slattery; "so I can" -> "and" for brevity; added speaker label "Wounded Soldier" from #761.
766	Slattery.
767	Slattery.
768	Slattery.
769	Slattery; "some potion" -> "a potion left" w/r/t kWhazit "a few more Potions"
770	Slattery.
771	Slattery. (Note: Early ROSE effort made edit "heard from you" -> "gotten a reply from you [kWhazit]" because of concerns about the phrase being potentially technically wrong in the context of a written letter, but there is actually plenty of basis in both pre- and post-20th century (telephone) literature for exactly that.)
772	Slattery.
773	Slattery.
774	Slattery.
775	Slattery; added "Lola" speaker label
776	Slattery; added "Lola" speaker label; "a record" -> "this record", since the point about the record is that it was a particular special one, though "the record [DarkMage]" would go a little too far and imply Lola somehow expects the characters already to know all about it.
777	Slattery; added "Lola" speaker label; first sentence repunctuated w/r/t Woolsey
778	First sentence Woolsey, "that" -> "his" for similar reason to the note for #776 takes the place of Slattery's novel clarification "he'd been reading"; Second & third sentences Slattery; added "Lola" speaker label.
779	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
780	Slattery.
781	Page 1: Slattery, repunctuated w/r/t FF6j/kWhazit. // Page 2: Slattery. // Page 2: Woolsey; "Tintinabar" -> "Tintinnabulum [Slattery]", reformatted.
782	Page 1: Slattery. // Page 2: Slattery; Slattery's novel "dirty" -> "plated" for consistency w/ the diving helmet graphic
783	Slattery; repunctuated w/r/t Woolsey; "I wonder if" -> "Think" for grammar pet peeve & brevity w/r/t Woolsey.
784	New, based on kWhazit, third person ("each of us") rather than second person, edited to suggest the existence of more than one helmet.
785	First sentence Woolsey & Slattery; Second sentence DarkMage; novel "This cave" -> "This". DarkMage edit gives Sabin a little more credit than all primary translations.
786	Slattery.
787	(W)
788	Page 1: W & S // Page 2: Slattery; "It seems" -> "'Twould seem"
789	(W)
790	Slattery.
791	Slattery.
792	Slattery; "What is it" -> "What's wrong"
793	Slattery.
794	Woolsey; "in there" ->"in it [kWhazit]"
795	Page 1: Slattery, edited for archaic style. // Page 2: New; based on kWhazit but uses Woolsey-like wording; The difference is between agreeing earnestly with Cyan (kWhazit/Lina Darkstar) and agreeing potentially snarkily (Woolsey/Slattery).
796	Slattery.
797	Slattery; first sentence repunctuated w/r/t kWhazit.
798	Page 1: Slattery; second sentence reformed as a question w/r/t kWhazit (& FF6j?). // Page 2: Woolsey; delay replaced with leading ellipsis, since this line went on a new page.
799	(W)
800	Woolsey; "Gau's" -> "Sir Gau's". Note: FF6j & Slattery do not have Gau's name here, instead refer to the "shiny" treasure. Woolsey's novelty is preferred.
801	Slattery.
802	Slattery; "few" -> "few notable" for immersion.
803	Slattery.
804	Slattery; "hands of the Empire" -> "Empire's hands" as well?
805	First sentence Slattery merged w/ Woolsey; Second sentence Slattery, or adaptive dialog for after party obtains airship, when it is unlikely the characters have just emerged from the ocean ("covered in filth").
806	Slattery; "This island's" -> "Nikeah's"; adaptive dialog for unblocked land route.
807	Slattery.
808	Slattery.
809	Slattery.
810	Slattery.
811	Slattery.
812	Page 1: Woolsey, "sailing" -> "sailing all the time" for flow. // Page 2: Woolsey, reformatted, "smashed" -> "smashed by the Empire" w/r/t Slattery "lost to the Empire".
813	Partial rewrite of Slattery with elements of Spooniest ("mouth of the" -> "mouth o' the"), Darkmage ("..., oh, thirteen years ago"), Lina Darkstar ("bloodstained", [FF6j lit. "red-stained"]), with additional checking against kWhazit for accuracy.
814	First sentence "Hellooo there!" a semi-cross between Woolsey "Yoo hoo" and kWhazit "Heyyyyy" w/r/t FF6j ねぇ～; Second sentence Woolsey, repunctuated; Third sentence Rodimus Primal (Woolsey merged w/ Slattery); Fourth sentence Slattery.
815	First sentence Woolsey, edited for archaic dialect; Second sentence Slattery.
816	First two sentences Woolsey, lightly reworded for less negativity; Third sentence Slattery; Fourth sentence Darkmage (Slattery lightly reworded, removed the unnecessary humpty dumpty bit)
817	New; follows pattern of Cyan (essentially) repeating back the dancer's own word.
818	Page 1: Slattery; "Cyan" -> "Sir Cyan" formal address in jest w/r/t kWhazit "Cyan-san", "you're" -> "you are" to fit the slightly different tone. // Page 2: Slattery, "charms" -> "displays"; "Charms" has no explicit basis in FF6j and risks feeling like Cyan is farther gone than he really is; slightly reformatted for style.
819	Slattery; "One of the" -> "Just one of the"
820	Woolsey, "Stop" -> "No more"; "My ears are burnin'" -> "Come on [kWhazit]"; Adaptive dialog uses Slattery if Sabin is not in the party.
821	Slattery; "And... ...rant...rant...rant..." -> "And...(rant)...(rave)..."
822	New, split difference b/t Slattery and Woolsey, with a bit more of an eyeroll vibe. Adaptive Dialog assigns line to laughing party member closest to Cyan (adds speaker label); Adaptive Dialog alt line used if Gau/Umaro is the speaker.
823	Slattery.
824	Slattery, edited for brevity w/r/t Woolsey
825	Slattery.
826	kWhazit (same as Woolsey w/ "just" -> "but").
827	Slattery.
828	Slattery; added ", sire." for style & one last use before WOR
829	Slattery.
830	Slattery.
831	Slattery.
832	kWhazit, reworded for style.
833	Page 1: First sentence DarkMage, second sentence Slattery edited for brevity; These are one sentence in FF6j ("It's been so long [kWhazit]"), so if keeping as two, best to have both as brief as possible; Third sentence Slattery, "Let me tell you" -> "I've got to say" to avoid repetition of the word "you" and the verb "tell/told" in the caption. // Page 2: Slattery. // Page 3: Woolsey, repunctuated. Sentence now ends in elipsis to more clearly imply the detail given in FF6j ("You'll use it to repair the roof [kWhazit]"). It's more humorous to keep it implicit.
834	Slattery w/ Woolsey's punctuation. The first question mark is better left out for tone, and shouldn't be required because the first, partial thought is completed by the second.
835	Slattery.
836	Page 1: First sentence kWhazit. Second sentence kWhazit, repunctuated w/r/t Woolsey, "But..." -> "Only..." // Page 2: Woolsey, toned down -- removed excalamation w/r/t kWhazit & Lina Darkstar, but slightly reworded to keep some of the jostled/protest feel. Keeps subject singular (Woolsey, Lina Darkstar) while kWhazit and Slattery have plural. // Page 3: New; compare meaning to kWhazit "It's the same thing", Lina Darkstar "Same thing", Woolsey "Something like it"; liberty to use second person granted from Slattery.
837	Slattery.
838	kWhazit; "Bannan" -> "Banon", "Jun" -> Arvis"
839	Page 1: Slattery. // Page 2: Slattery; "That's the reason" -> "It's for that very reason" w/r/t kWhazit "It was for that purpose" -- in Slattery's wording, it's easy to get the impression that the link between Espers and Magitek would have been obvious to the Elder, when in reality, Banon is presumably revealing that link to the Elder here for the first time; "esper that was discovered" -> "Esper you discovered" to avoid redundant use of the word "that", drawn from DarkMage "esper you unearthed". // Page 3: Slattery, substantially reworded to remove the "weapons of mass destruction" reference and reformatted for a single page; "allow the Empire to continue" -> "continue to allow the Empire" w/r/t kWhazit "keep letting the Empire".
840	(W & S)
841	Page 1 & 2: Slattery; added "Guard" labels. // Page 2: Slattery.
842	Slattery.
843	Slattery.
844	Woolsey; "wiped out" -> "massacred" w/r/t kWhazit; "wiped out" considered a bit too nonchalant of a term to use with Cyan in the room.
845	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery. Kept "Everyone..." at the end w/r/t kWhazit, though order is different.
846	W & S; added elipsis before "!" w/r/t FF6j, also adds more shock to the expression.
847	Page 1: W & S; Page 2: Slattery merged w/ kWhazit; Page 3: Slattery; "we have nothing to fear" -> "we will have no more to fear" for more credibility & consistency, given that it would be lost on no one that neutral Narshe had just recently been violated by the Empire.
848	Slattery. Woolsey's "That's nonsense" compares to kWhazit's "Nonsense!"; however, "Nonsense!" sounds like Locke is going to follow up with a persuasive argument, rather than instantly prove the Elder wrong with news of the impending Imperial attack.
849	Slattery; "poised" -> "moving". "Poised" (W & S), while a nice word, here is considered too passive/generic, describing the disposition of the Empire without necessarily announcing anything new or impending -- and so detracts from the impact of the line.
850	Page 1: kWhazit. // Page 2: Slattery, repunctuated for timing -- an explicit pause after "Celes here" w/r/t Woolsey & kWhazit, also long trailoff w/r/t FF6j "gen...... (kWhazit)" rather than an abrupt cutoff. Locke seems to be catching himself saying too much.
851	First sentence Slattery, "her" -> "she" formal grammar fits with archaic style, "is" -> "IS" drawn from Spooniest, also nudges tone a little closer to literal "So that was it! (kWhazit)" / "So that's it! (Lina Darkstar)"; Second sentence DarkMage, "thy" -> "her", lightly repunctuated, compare to kWhazit "I thought it a face I had seen somewhere..."; Third sentence kWhazit/Darkmage.
852	First sentence kWhazit, "destroyed the country" -> "torched (Woolsey) the lands", lightly repunctuated for rhythm; Second sentence kWhazit merged w/ Lina Darkstar, confirmed w/r/t Mato; Third sentence Slattery, minus the inventive repurposing of the "dog" comment at the end.
853	Page 1: kWhazit superimposed on Woolsey's tone & rhythm. // Page 2: Slattery. // Page 3: Slattery, broken into two sentences w/r/t FF6j & Woolsey; "I won't" -> "I'll never" to push Locke's overkilled sentiment a touch farther, adding fuel for Edgar's reaction.
854	New; Converted to a figure of speech for subtlety.
855	Slattery (Woolsey repunctuated).
856	Slattery; "doesn't mean that all" -> "doesn't mean all"
857	First sentence Woolsey minus an exclamation point; Second sentence New -- like Woolsey ("The Empire cometh!"), opts exchanges explicit "attack" for a reference to the approach; Lina Darkstar kept it literal "The Empire's attacking!" while Slattery & kWhazit make slight deviations in their own way to better match the following scene.
858	Woolsey; "what you do here" -> "what you have to do (Slattery)"; compare to kWhazit "no matter what it takes".
859	Page 1: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery; Page 2: Slattery. // Page 3: kWhazit, repunctuated for the speaker getting cut off -- kWhazit is the only source that renders the line as getting interrupted; "But" -> "But, sir, (Slattery, novel)". Page 4: Woolsey/kWhazit.
860	First sentence Slattery repunctuated; Second sentence drawn in part from Spooniest -- a middle ground b/t Ted "The Poet Who Didn't Know It" Woolsey and Tom "Better Make A Huge Thing Out Of It" Slattery; Third sentence Woolsey/Slattery, edited to preserve the meaning w/r/t kWhazit ("Move!!"): "March!" its own sounds like an formal order to begin marching, -> "Now, march!" within context appropriately feels like "Keep moving!", better matching the action on screen.
861	Slattery.
862	Slattery, Page 1 repunctuated w/r/t Woolsey/kWhazit.
863	Slattery.
864	Slattery; "protecting" -> "defending" w/r/t kWhazit "stuck up"; "love" -> "affection" -- a valid translation, and Lina Darkstar ("something like love") also senses that the L word might be a bit out of place; also makes Celes's response that much more piercing if she's the one to use the word first.
865	Page 1: Slattery, slightly repuncuated. // Page 2: Darkmage, "that was" -> "that's" to nudge the tone a bit more torwards playful -- compare to kWhazit "What a chilling line!"; Darkmage appends Slattery's novel rewrite "So much for my next suggestion_", and that is kept here as well because it is great.
866	Page 1: Slattery. Slattery changes Celes's address "The girl born with the power of sorcery/magic" to simply "Terra...", which is fine because 1) Woolsey couldn't figure out how to deal with it, either, and 2) the original is giving me "Star Player of the Zanarkand Abes..." flashbacks. // Page 2: Slattery repunctuated w/r/t kWhazit. // Page 3: Slattery's terminology superimposed on kWhazit's structure. // Page 4: kWhazit, repunctuated w/r/t Slattery. // Page 5: kWhazit. (Slattery, "...?" -> "???")
867	Page 1: Slattery; "even for a moment" -> "for a moment" for brevity. // Page 2: Slattery.
868	Slattery. Literally it's "Brother" / "Big brother", but Sabin appeals to his brother as such a few lines later, and we don't want to overkill it with an address that's uncommon in English to begin with.
869	(W & S)
870	New. Slightly friendlier than kWhazit "And these are?".
871	Slattery; "going to" -> "gonna"
872	Slattery.
873	Slattery; "ready" -> "prepared (Woolsey)"
874	Page 1: Slattery; "Oh...!" -> "Oho! (Woolsey)". // Page 2: First sentence Slattery, repunctuated w/r/t kWhazit; Second sentence Slattery.
875	Woolsey/Slattery, repunctuated w/r/t kWhazit.
876	Slattery; "Would you like" -> "Need (Woolsey)" for brevity.
877	Page 1: Woolsey; "3" -> "three", "Use" -> "Press". // Page 2: Slattery. Omits GBA's additional info about the "party formation screen".
878	Slattery; "the slave crown" -> "that crown (Woolsey)"
879	First sentence Lina Darkstar; Second sentence New, figure of speech has essentially the same meaning as literal "I won't let you have your way! (kWhazit)" in context; Literal falls rather flat, so Woolsey rewrites completely ("We are your worst enemy!"); Slattery tries a compromise ("I'm not gonna let them walk all over people!") which also lacks punch due to its length.
880	kWhazit merged w/ Slattery
881	First sentence Woolsey, "grr..." -> "(grumble)..."; Second sentence kWhazit.
882	Slattery; "It's time to" -> "Time to"; repunctuated w/r/t FF6j/kWhazit.
883	Darkmage (W & S, "will" -> "shall")
884	Woolsey; restored "Uwao" to beginning w/r/t FF6j's initial "Gau!" exclamation which typically is converted to "Uwao" in localization.
885	First sentence Slattery, "me" -> "this point (Spooniest)" for clarity; Second sentence kWhazit.
886	Spooniest (Woolsey repunctuated; compare to kWhazit).
887	Slattery.
888	Slattery; "The esper's safe" -> "Our frozen Esper's safe and sound": Instead of omitting "frozen" (kWhazit: "icebound"), the line is dramatized slightly to balance it out, and it works well with Edgar. A straight rendering "The frozen Esper is safe" is too awkward here. Early ROSE efforts did a bolder play off of the "frozen" ommission, appending "Perfectly frozen in ice..." to the end of the Slattery line -- a nice line, but far from necessary.
889	Slattery.
890	Slattery.
891	Slattery superimposed on FF6j/kWhazit's structure.
892	Woolsey.
893	Slattery.
894	Slattery.
895	Woolsey; "looked like_" -> "looked a lot like_" to prevent awkwardness of a verbatim repetition before a second hesitation -- idea likely drawn from Spooniest ("looked just like_"), and Lina Darkstar also adjusts the tone of the repeated words via italics, which cannot be done here -- Slattery avoided the awkwarness by removing the hesitation while keeping the repetition verbatim; Ended line with period instead of ellipsis w/r/t Slattery.
896	Slattery.
897	Page 1: Lina Darkstar; "awoke within" -> "sparked inside of"; according to Lina Darkstar, the action is best translated as acting "within" Terra rather than "to" Terra. Woolsey/Slattery/kWhazit agree on "Something happened to Terra". "Within" works just as well, if not better, in context. The word "sparked" has some basis, as "to blaze up (fire)" is one definition given for the verb when looked up. // Page 2: New. Based on Slattery; "There must be some sort of connection" -> "Perhaps we underestimated the ties". FF6j has Edgar wondering aloud whether there might be some connection between Terra and the Esper, as though that hadn't already been established previously. What's new is that the kind of relationship is not what the party expected. Warrants a rewrite for consistency. // Page 3: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
898	Slattery.
899	Page1: W & S. // Page 2: Woolsey. Slattery is more literal overall but is missing a "maybe" qualifier -- and adding one in bogs down the sentence. Woolsey is good here. Both Slattery & Woolsey omit explicit reference to Narshe which is OK. // Page 3: "Slattery; "protect" -> "guard" to avoid repetition w/ #898.
900	Page 1: Woolsey; "stay and guard" -> "stay and help defend (Darkmage)". // Page 2: Slattery; "province" -> "lands (Lina Darkstar, kWhazit)" -- Hard to let go of such a nice word, "province", but it's a misleading Woolsey invention.
901	Slattery.
902	Slattery, slightly repunctuated.
903	Slattery.
904	Slattery; "flew off" -> "tore off into the sky" to keep some of the imagery of Woolsey ("She ripped outta here!"); capitalized Esper. Tough to make more literal renderings sound natural without changing the meaning.
905	New, based on kWhazit "Aid that girl without fail!"
906	Slattery.
907	Slattery; sentences reordered w/r/t kWhazit; "Hurry" -> "Just hurry".
908	Slattery.
909	Slattery.
910	First sentence Woolsey; Second sentence Slattery.
911	(W & S)
912	(W & S)
913	Darkmage (First sentence edited Woolsey; Second sentence Slattery), lightly repunctuated w/r/t Slattery & kWhazit.
914	Slattery.
915	First sentence new, based on kWhazit & Mato; Second sentence Darkmage (Slattery, "war" -> "outright war"); Third sentence Slattery, lightly repunctuated. All edits w/r/t style, not accuracy.
916	RPGOne via Mato, lightly edited for style.
917	Darkmage, lightly edited w/r/t Slattery verb tense.
918	Slattery.
919	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery; lightly edited for style.
920	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery; uncensored; "Empire won't listen" -> "Empire won't leave us alone" for slightly better accuracy w/r/t Slattery "still we are not spared from the Empire's agression".
921	Slattery; "incredible" -> "awesome (Mato)"
922	Page 1: Slattery; incorporates Darkmage "up on the ledge"; Adaptive Dialog changes the indicated relative direction of the house depending on the position of the M.C. // Page 2: kWhazit, substantially reworded for tone & style (New.)
923	Slattery.
924	Mato; "Narshe" -> "Narshe, of all places" for clarity; "stupid frozen Esper" -> "freakish [E]sper (Slattery)"
925	Slattery; "It looks" -> "Looks", "war is" -> "war's" for brevity & style somewhat w/r/t Woolsey.
926	Woolsey; "sasquatch" -> "yeti", "mine" -> "mines" w/r/t Slattery. Slattery may be closer to literal h
927	Slattery; "Lone Wolf, the infamous thief" -> "The infamous thief Lone Wolf" (Darkmage)
928	Darkmage (Slattery; "started selling" -> "stocked")
929	Slattery.
930	Slattery, significantly toned down without going flat. The explicit drunkenness is a Slattery invention; Mato on FF6j: 'He just speaks like a regular old man.'
931	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
932	Slattery.
933	Darkmage (Slattery, first sentence reworded for parallel construction), adaptive dialog for A/B button configuration.
934	Woolsey; "GP" -> "gil".
935	Slattery; adaptive dialog for rare case where Edgar has not left yet.
936	New; based on Slattery's tone, but closer to literal w/r/t Mato "Seeing Kefka filled with chagrin/frustration/annoyance was a wonderful sight to behold." FF6j does not reference the sinking into the sand explicitly. Adaptive dialog to use slightly different wording if the M.C. was present during that event.
937	Darkmage; "I saw" -> "We saw", possibly to keep something of Woolsey in #936 -- and there is no explicit "I/We saw" in FF6j; "to the west" -> "in the west (Slattery)". The "like a shooting star" phrase is a good image for FF6j's "giving off light".
938	Slattery; "human" -> "person (Woolsey)", since Terra is not looking particularly "human" at that moment.
939	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery; Slattery "under the mountains if there's a desert" -> "under the mountains to the desert" -- no use talking hypothetically, since there is exactly one, known, use case here -- otherwise, it sounds like it's introducing a potentially fun exploration mechanic that never materialized; Adaptive dialog for M.C. Edgar.
940	Slattery, reworded for style, "dive" -> "burrow"; Adaptive dialog for M.C. Edgar.
941	Slattery; "broken off" -> "officially broken off", since the unofficial breakoff is not news to anyone.
942	First sentence New, w/r/t Mato "You must be tired from your long journey and war." -- edited to be more conversational; Second sentence Darkmage.
943	Darkmage (Slattery; "one time" -> "sometime").
944	Slattery; removed "Ah," & repunctuated w/r/t kWhazit.
945	Slattery, lightly reworded for brevity w/r/t Woolsey.
946	Page 1: Slattery; "High Priestess" -> "Matron" (see #91); "Oh, Sabin..." -> "Sabin! My goodness..." w/r/t Darkmage "Sabin! Oh my goodness..."; "sure have" -> "certainly have", slightly more obvious callback to #108. // Page 2: Slattery.
947	(W)
948	Slattery; "Sabin?" -> "L-Lord Sabin?" w/r/t Darkmage "Lord Sabin", likely invented.
949	Slattery.
950	(W & S)
951	Page 1: Woolsey. // Page 2: Slattery.
952	First two sentences Woolsey; Third sentence Slattery, lightly repunctuated; Divided the 10-unit delay among the three lines.
953	Slattery; Divided the 10-unit delay among the three lines.
954	Woolsey, repunctuated w/r/t Slattery; Divided the 10-unit delay among the two lines.
955	Woolsey, repunctuated w/r/t kWhazit; Divided the 10-unit delay among the two lines.
956	kWhazit merged w/ Slattery -- mostly kWhazit. Early ROSE effort attempts to superimpose the poison implication (kWhazit/Lina Darkstar) onto a denial expression (Woolsey/Slattery), but this falls short because it creates an expression of initial acceptance rather than the proper reaffirmation of a prior idea.
957	Page 1: Woolsey merged w/ Slattery. // Page 2: kWhazit merged w/ Woolsey; "Father" -> "Dad (Slattery)".
958	Slattery.
959	First sentence Lina Darkstar (compare to kWhazit "Just now, your father..."); Second sentence elements of kWhazit and Slattery.
960	Page 1: First sentence Woolsey, "NONSENSE" -> "PATHETIC", from Woolsey "You're all pathetic!" removed from page 2 -- it's a fantastic word here; Second sentence Slattery, "Everyone's" -> "Everyone_ they're all (kWhazit)". // Page 2: First sentence Slattery, "you" -> "YOU" for intensity, repunctuated w/r/t Woolsey; Second sentence Slattery, "No one's" -> "No one is", repunctuated w/r/t kWhazit.
961	Lina Darkstar, lightly repunctuated.
962	Page 1: Slattery. // Page 2: Repunctuated w/r/t FF6j -- The distinguishing feature is the hard stop moreso than the ellipsis. // Page 3: Slattery.
963	Page 1: Slattery merged w/ Woolsey. // Page 2: Slattery; "You said" -> "You said yourself" w/r/t kWhazit "didn't you say yourself". // Page 3: Woolsey, repunctuated.
964	Woolsey, repunctuated w/r/t Slattery.
965	Page1: Slattery merged w/ kWhazit, new wording "abandonded the throne" stands in for kWhazit "loses both heirs at once" when superimposing on Slattery's structure. // Page 2: Slattery simplified w/r/t kWhazit.
966	Slattery.
967	First & second sentences Slattery; Third sentence Slattery, edited for brevity in part w/r/t kWhazit/Lina Darkstar; Third & fourth sentences Slattery lightly reformatted.
968	New; compare to Slattery & kWhazit.
969	Slattery merged w/ kWhazit.
970	Page 1: First sentence Slattery; Second sentence Woolsey. // Page 2: W & S.
971	Slattery.
972	Slattery.
973	Slattery (Woolsey reformatted); "Ten years" -> "Ten whole years" to avoid wording duplication w/ #970.
974	Slattery.
975	Darkmage (Slattery/Woolsey repunctuated w/r/t Lina Darkstar -- compare to kWhazit).
976	kWhazit, recapitalized.
977	Slattery; Adaptive dialog for M.C. Edgar.
978	Slattery, partially repunctuated w/r/t Woolsey.
979	Slattery, partially repunctuated w/r/t Woolsey.
980	First sentence kWhazit, Adaptive dialog for M.C. Edgar; Second sentence Darkmage (Slattery; "undergoing maintenance" -> "being serviced", omits wordy "if the need arises" at the end), "currently" -> "continuously" w/r/t kWhazit "constant maintenance".
981	Slattery; First (novel) sentence simplified & adaptive dialog for M.C. Edgar. Repunctuated for tone w/r/t Woolsey.
982	(W)
983	Slattery.
984	Slattery.
985	New; Combines some wording of Slattery and Woolsey, more literal w/r/t FF6j, keeps Woolsey's tone.
986	Slattery merged w/ kWhazit; Removed novel "strange" in Slattery: "A strange, glowing creature" -> "Some glowing (Darkmage)"; lightly reworded for style.
987	Slattery.
988	First sentence Slattery; Second sentence Woolsey, "bring a handsome escort" -> "have a handsome escort" w/r/t Darkmage
989	Slattery; reworded slightly to emphasize that it is Locke's routine to stop by Rachel's house when he is in town; adaptive dialog for M.C. not Locke.
990	First sentence New -- essentially same meaning as Woolsey/Slattery but slightly more fitting for the shot in the dark that the speaker is taking; Second sentence Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
991	Page 1: First sentence Slattery; Second sentence Slattery; "smelly old" -> "strange" -- "smelly old" is fairly novel and sounds redunant in the same sentence as "Crazy old". // Page 2: Slattery; "he's got a ghost" -> "he keeps ghosts (Woolsey)" -- plural is better for keeping the rumor inaccurate.
992	First sentence Slattery; Second sentence Darkmage (Slattery reworded), reworded further for simplicity & tone.
993	Slattery.
994	W & S; adaptive dialog if a character in the party has met Shadow -- uses text from caption #995.
995	Slattery, repunctuated w/r/t Woolsey.
996	(W & S)
997	Slattery.
998	Slattery.
999	Woolsey, "wasn't able" -> "wasn't there"; "to save her" -> "to protect her"; reworded as a complete sentence w/r/t Slattery & kWhazit; retains Woolsey's novel-ish "when she needed me"; "needed me" -> "needed me most"
1000	Woolsey/Slattery; "to find" -> "to look for" to avoid redundancy w/ #1002.
1001	Lina Darkstar. This is the line that probably inspired Woolsey's "She said 'Yes'!" in #1007, but Woolsey ("Soon, you'll...") does not capture the implication here. There is likely some ambiguity in FF6j, though, because Slattery ("It's almost your..."), likely closer to literal, misses the implication altogether.
1002	Slattery; "We're gonna" -> "And we're gonna (Darkmage)".
1003	W & S, reformatted.
1004	Slattery.
1005	(W & S)
1006	(W)
1007	Page 1: Darkmage (Woolsey; "Get outta here" -> "Get the hell out"); "she's" -> "my daughter's (kWhazit)" // Page 2: Slattery; repunctuated w/r/t FF6j/kWhazit
1008	Slattery; "Please, just go away" -> "Please, go away" to avoid redundacy w/ #1007; "my parents" -> "my whole family (kWhazit)". This scene must take place a period of time after Rachel first awoke -- something Woolsey seems to have missed.
1009	Page 1: First sentence Slattery merged w/ Lina Darkstar -- avoid's Slattery's use of Locke's name here instead of second page; Second sentence Woolsey/Slattery, "She's" -> "That girl's (kWhazit)". // Page 2: kWhazit merged w/ Slattery; "With you here" -> "As long as you're here" to avoid slightly redundant phrasing w/ previous page.
1010	Page 1: kWhazit. // Page 2: kWhazit; "was gone from this world" -> "was...no longer with us", a more localized euphamistic phrase for death; added "I found out (Slattery)". // Page 3: First sentence Slattery; Second sentence kWhazit, wording broken up slightly differently for pacing. // Page 4: Slattery. // Page 5: (W & S) -- in FF6j, this simply repeats #999 (lit. "I couldn't/didn't protect her") with different pacing, but official translations use slightly novel "I failed her" pharaphrase instead, to memorable effect.
1011	Darkmage (Slattery w/ first sentence rewritten).
1012	Slattery.
1013	Slattery.
1014	Slattery, "I'm never" -> "I ain't EVER" for style.
1015	First sentence Slattery, "rather unsavory" -> "pretty rough"; Second & Third sentences New -- retains "They say..." as likely in FF6j (see Mato stream), and uses different phrasing to avoid redundancy w/ #1013.
1016	Slattery.
1017	Page 1: Woolsey, adaptive dialog for M.C. not Locke. // Page 2: Woolsey; "Your treasure's" -> "Your 'treasure' is" w/r/t Rodimus Primal, possibly via RPGOne (See Mato stream).
1018	(W)
1019	(W & S)
1020	Page 1: First sentence Slattery, edited for brevity, "have finished this herbal concoction" -> "have this herbal concoction on hand" w/r/t kWhazit "handy", "back then" -> "right then" to emphasize the timeliness of the whole situation; Second sentence Slattery; Third sentence Woolsey. // Page 2: First sentence New, based primarily on kWhazit, "most earnest of requests (kWhazit)" -> "so ardently requested" partly w/r/t Slattery "begging me like that...", adaptive dialog uses Locke's name w/r/t FF6j if M.C. not Locke -- formats as a question w/r/t Woolsey if M.C. is Locke; Second sentence Woolsey.
1021	Slattery.
1022	Split difference b/t Woolsey & Slattery; (kWhazit: "for ever and ever.")
1023	Woolsey's content superimposed on the structure of Slattery/kWhazit; "What if" -> "And if", since Locke likely had already come up with the general idea; keeps Woolsey's ommission of references to Rachel's "wandering spirit (Slattery)" -- considered too explicitly metaphysical for Locke here.
1024	Woolsey; slight edit "Kuha, ha" -> "Kuha_ha". Woolsey omits explicit reference to "that" particular "legendary treasure" in favor of "something out there that'll bring her around" to memorable effect. Slattery tries to merge the two, but the effect is somewhat lost in his rendering.
1025	Woolsey, slightly reformatted.
1026	(W & S)
1027	Woolsey; "Dear me! Almost" -> "Dear me, I almost (Slattery)"
1028	Slattery.
1029	Page 1: First sentence Woolsey; Second sentence Slattery. // Page 2: Slattery; "up in the north" -> "to the north (Woolsey)".
1030	Darkmage (Slattery; "in the valley between the mountains" -> "in the mountains"); added "a while back" to first sentence; Slattery's novel "I hear they" -> "They've" since Zozo is well-known enough by now not to be considered unconfirmed news.
1031	Slattery; "opera diva" -> "opera singer (Woolsey)".
1032	Slattery.
1033	Slattery; "bathed in light" -> "wrapped in fire (Woolsey)"; "speed off" -> "rocketing" w/r/t kWhazit "with incredible vigor"
1034	First sentence kWhazit merged with Slattery; Second sentence Slattery with significant changes to wording for style: "den" -> "stomping ground", "thieves and ne'er do wells" -> "rogues and criminals"; adaptive dialog shows text from unused caption #1153 after the first Zozo episode is finished.
1035	First sentence kWhazit; Second sentence Slattery.
1036	(W & S). Unused in Vanilla FF3us.
1037	First sentence Slattery, "Every once in a while" -> "Every now and then (Darkmage)", "shady guys" -> "rascals", "wanders" -> "will wander" w/r/t Woolsey; Second sentence Woolsey.
1038	First sentence Slattery; Second sentence retains "ah...dorky!" Woolseyism, but adds explicit reference to the player character's "attire" for flow/context, inspired in part by Darkmage ("no fashion sense") -- likely far from literal/FF6j (Slattery: "Straighten your back! Don't slump so much!"), but gives the entertaining impression of an aristocrat experimenting with low-brow slang for fun; adaptive dialog for M.C. Celes uses text from unused caption #2623.
1039	Slattery; adaptive dialog added for M.C. Relm & M.C. Umaro (art admirers).
1040	Slattery; adaptive dialog based on Woolsey added for M.C. Edgar & M.C. Setzer (very wealthy characters).
1041	First sentence Darkmage (expansion of Woolsey similar in meaning & tone to kWhazit), "wayward spirits" -> "departed souls (Slattery)"; Second sentence Woolsey with minor rephrasing.
1042	Slattery.
1043	Page 1: Woolsey. This line is great when taken in isolation. Page break. // Page 2: Slattery, simplified to carry forward the same tone & gag as the previous page.
1044	Slattery.
1045	Woolsey, adjusted word order & reformatted.
1046	Woolsey, lightly expanded & reformatted.
1047	Slattery, "Trust me" -> "I'll give it to you straight", reformatted.
1048	Darkmage (Woolsey; "go home" -> "head home"), reformatted.
1049	Woolsey/Slattery, reformatted.
1050	Slattery.
1051	Slattery.
1052	Slattery.
1053	Slattery.
1054	Slattery.
1055	Slattery.
1056	Slattery.
1057	Darkmage (Slattery w/ some rework); further edits "on the wall over there" -> "over on the wall" for brevity, "lost its minute hand" -> "is missing its minute hand", "never showed the right time" -> "hasn't been pointing to the right minute" for more definitive clarity with the riddle.
1058	Slattery.
1059	(Unused) Slattery, edited to unambiguously maintain the speaker's honesty.
1060	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery; "at the 4" -> "at the 2". Four in this case, corresponding to 20 seconds, appears to be a mistake. While it does not contradict the riddle solution, it overlaps with #1058, thus failing to yield an unambigous answer for the seconds when combined with #1056 and #1058. The other two hints narrow it down to 10 and 50 seconds; "at the 2" properly eliminates "10 seconds" and leaves us with the correct answer, "50 seconds".
1061	Page 1: Slattery. // Page 2: First sentence Slattery, "quick" -> "nimble (kWhazit)"; Second sentence Slattery, "'em" -> "them"; Third sentence Slattery, edited for brevity.
1062	Page 1: Slattery; "let" -> "help" // Page 2: Slattery; adaptive dialog for M.C. Gau
1063	(W)
1064	Slattery; adaptive dialog replaces normal text with text from unused caption #1059 once if the player speaks to this NPC a second time.
1065	Slattery.
1066	Slattery, edited for brevity.
1067	(W)
1068	Page 1: Woolsey, lightly edited for style, adaptive dialog replaces "gentle folks" for singular M.C. -- not as literal as Slattery ("What brings you up here on this fine day?") or kWhazit ("What did you want on such a sunny day?"). // Page 2: Slattery. -- Slattery expands on the original some here, and it works. // Page 3: Slattery; "I'm not very strong in a fight" -> "I'm not much for fighting", closer in meaning to Woolsey ("I hate fighting"), since some players may agree with him that he's not very strong; further minor edits for more definitive lying.
1069	(W)
1070	(W)
1071	Woolsey merged w/ Slattery.
1072	Woolsey/Slattery, repunctuated for style; speaker label added via adaptive dialog.
1073	Woolsey; "scared" -> "frightened (Slattery)".
1074	Slattery; adaptive dialog for speaker label and dialect.
1075	kWhazit, adaptive dialog for party size.
1076	Woolsey; speaker label added via adaptive dialog.
1077	Slattery; "all right" -> "sound" for archaic style.
1078	(W & S)
1079	Slattery, reformatted.
1080	Slattery; "Interesting" -> "How peculiar".
1081	Page 1: Slattery. // Page 2: Slattery, reformatted and lightly edited for less formal tone.
1082	Slattery; adaptive dialog adds speaker label if speaker is solo.
1083	Slattery; speaker label added via adaptive dialog.
1084	Slattery.
1085	Slattery; "right?" -> "That wrong? (Darkmage)"; additional minor edits for style.
1086	Page 1: Woolsey, reformatted; "don't live here" -> "can't live here" w/r/t Slattery & kWhazit. // Page 2: Slattery.
1087	Slattery; adaptive dialog for speaker Cyan & to add speaker label.
1088	Woolsey; "fact you" -> "you being".
1089	New. Based on Lina Darkstar ("Humans and Espers are not creatures that can mutually coexist.") & kWhazit ("Humans and [Espers] cannot coexist."), converted into a more rhetorically-geared statement rather than an absolute which would be partly contradicted only a few captions later in #1094.
1090	Page 1: Slattery merged w/ kWhazit. // Page 2: Darkmage, repunctuated w/r/t FF6j/kWhazit.
1091	Page 1: Slattery merged w/ kWhazit; speaker label added via adaptive dialog. // Page 2: kWhazit, with minor rephrasing for clarity.
1092	Page 1: Slattery; "I've heard" -> "I once heard"; speaker label added via adaptive dialog. // Page 2: kWhazit, with minor rephrasing for clarity.
1093	Slattery; lightly edited for style.
1094	Page 1: Slattery; "Humans and espers" -> "Our kinds" for brevity w/r/t Woolsey ("We"). // Page 2: Slattery.
1095	Woolsey; speaker label added via adaptive dialog.
1096	Slattery. Woolsey & Slattery rephrase the second sentene a bit vs. literal (kWhazit: "A war involving the Genjuu, and sorcerers created with power extracted from Genjuu.")
1097	Page 1: Lina Darkstar, edited somewhat based on Slattery -- "be used once again" -> "be targeted again (Slattery)". // Page 2: Lina Darkstar, edited for lore clarity: "They created a magical barrier" -> "So they conjured a barrier around a secluded region" in part w/r/t kWhazit "made ourselves a separate realm"; "Esper world" -> "Esper realm".
1098	kWhazit merged w/ Slattery -- result is somewhat similar to Woolsey.
1099	Slattery, wording rearranged for simplicity of sentence structure; added imagery with "rip the sorcerous energy out of us" w/r/t Lina Darkstar ("Ghastra ripped the power of magic from Espers").

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